Dynamic Magic Box
Story begins with a young boy.His is name is Jack and he lives in Macedonia. He lives in middle class family with parents and his sister. He is sober person and he does not talk to other boys. Due to lack of good financial condition, he is not capable of getting new things,whatever he wants mostly.
He lives sad most of times. He studies in 8th grade. One day when he is going to school early in the morning. Even though he doesn't notice on other things, he spontaneously focuses on a old car is standing beside the rode. He check the car because he hears sound from the car.
When he figures out in car even though he is scared,he finds a box there. There is written "magic box" on the magic box. He picks it takes it home. When he opens then a grotesque voice comes out. However He is afraid of this, he does not rush from there.
Inside of magic box he gets one a paper on that written "I am Jakaboz". Now he is really scared. He leaves that there and he starts doing other things. After sometime, most of weird things begin to occur in his life. However, even though he doesn't focus on those things.
When next day he goes to school. In the way, he looks a bicycle that was laying besides the rode at the place of car.
Instead of thinking about something, he picks up and starts riding. He was really happy because he does not have his bicycle. When he parks his bicycle outside of school. When he comes back from school then it was not there. He tries to figure out even though he could not do that.
He gets lots of things like that for a few more days. Now starts feeling better and now he talks a little bit his friends.
Your story was like real that is happening with some boys and that why I like it . ๐
ReplyDeleteI like youre imagination☺
ReplyDeleteHmmm your imagination can make you more better if you try more๐๐
ReplyDeleteAll the plotting elements are there.
ReplyDeleteGood job!
I feel end can be more exciting and thrilling.
Mahesh kuamar.
Thanks for your suggestions.
DeleteI could not finish the script. I will work on it little bit more for making interesting.